Critique my promo!

I'm 1 year in the biz! Rate, criticize, give me tips on my promo.

http://youtu.be/QzQO9CRXoHA

Blue name, help a noob out?!

BTW, I'm the English speaking guy!

Any aspiring wrestler could learn a lot off this guy

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I thought it was good, you don't look like a heel tho. Phone Post 3.0

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I thought it was good but I'd like a slightly more mincing laugh at the end, kinda sets the tone better for the next show. Phone Post 3.0

Ok, You're a "Lifecoach and Athletic Advisor" I watched 3 of the promos i found on youtube.

Why the track suit? You a mouthpiece/valet. Always overdress. You definitely don't look like a heel as was stated above. In your current state, you have that 'fuzzy/energetic' thing going on(which screams face). I think the track suit only adds to that. I like your energy. You have a great heel laugh. The promos are shot too close though. I think they need to be shot from a bit farther away. And they could benefit from having someone actually lead the promo with questions. That's always good for heels because they can make fun of the interviewer, or cut them off, or tell them to shut up.

Holy shit Ryan Rogan's teeth! It makes him sound funny. He should 100% let you do all the talking. It makes it very hard to take him seriously at all, the way he sounds.

You have talent, that's clear. But I think you'd benefit from rehearsing exactly what you're going to say and sticking to it. Almost like a stand up comic routine. I could tell when you go off the tracks a bit like when you said "if that even is your real name". It didn't fit.

Just my opinions though. Keep at it. Again, you have talent.

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Thanks for the feedback guys! As I said, I'm new to all of this. I'm located in Montreal and work mostly in Quebec Indies. I'm a heel manager due to being an anglophone. I'm wearing a track suit because all the other managers in the area wear awful suits. And my gimmick is of an out of shape big mouth, know-it-all.

CDavidBlackburn - Thanks for the feedback guys! As I said, I'm new to all of this. I'm located in Montreal and work mostly in Quebec Indies. I'm a heel manager due to being an anglophone. I'm wearing a track suit because all the other managers in the area wear awful suits. And my gimmick is of an out of shape big mouth, know-it-all.
It's easy for me to say 'do this, do that' from where I am but I've never been in the wrestling business, hope you're having fun with it. Phone Post 3.0

I was brought in to a fed called CRW. I was teamed up with Ryan Rogan and Alex Silva (of OVW and TNA) to help them in a feud with the face owners of the company. Our first match was against Rene Dupree and Jeremy Prophat. We said we would quit the company if we didn't win. We lost and were giving a second chance to keep wrestling for the company. Below is a promo I was "instructed" to shoot.


http://youtu.be/FtANsGYN3yU

After the promo above of me promising to be a good person and to carry myself as a professional. Here was our response. Cheesy but fun. In this video you will see me and my guys, and the father and son who run CRW.


http://youtu.be/M6vnyMNKp-I

All of that led to this match. 3 vs 3 Street Fight. Ryan Rogan, Alex Silva and me vs Prophat, Pat Skillz and Gille Boucher(Pats father). Poorly shot but fun match.

http://youtu.be/mR3sG4N_ITI

I'll take a look in a bit. Phone Post 3.0

I'll check it out here in a bit, I will hopefully be working my first match in 2015 started training but have since been dealing with a torn meniscus, torn quad, and now a torn ACL that requires another surgery. Phone Post 3.0

Also thanks for posting. Phone Post 3.0

The tracksuit actually works really well IMO. Kind of reminds me of Kenny Powers.

And people say you look to friendly or whatever to be heel. Well, who ever heard of a face mouthpiece that was worth a damn? You are doing fine.

dangerboy12 - The tracksuit actually works really well IMO. Kind of reminds me of Kenny Powers.

And people say you look to friendly or whatever to be heel. Well, who ever heard of a face mouthpiece that was worth a damn? You are doing fine.

Thanks Champ! Ill be shooting a promo this week for an event this Sunday. Ill post it up.