latest art work...more critiques please.

i've been trying to take some of your critiques to heart and put them into practice with my work so here are some of my latest pieces, please give me more critiques


these first two are line drawings for water coloring

https://fbcdn-sphotos-b-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xfp1/v/t1.0-9/10580058_10204539565508455_1181855871553653125_n.jpg?oh=197d7c426811476244b15e10ca20c93e&oe=5486B93E&__gda__=1422607963_d0fae84338a0116264b9e833a64894f9

https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xfp1/v/t1.0-9/10455070_10204538756408228_2601715622707742615_n.jpg?oh=9dec28021c05ae10e21722d28c7a44fe&oe=54C450D6&__gda__=1419098291_a970f52cbdf27744e1ade367eb0d0398


these two are ones i've done and did the coloring shading on with markers

https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xpf1/v/t1.0-9/10250169_10204613758043222_6573713727463892152_n.jpg?oh=13d7ec409377501827a652cdb88626e6&oe=5486EC0C&__gda__=1422244467_653a50084dda892cf3e65e141e0e4e1b


https://scontent-a-lga.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpa1/v/t1.0-9/10689843_10204625623619854_8339679056016380593_n.jpg?oh=10f887727010e0a2c7d610837db40b6b&oe=54C71EDB


thanks for any input

Pretjah, you know that I love you but please invest in uploading your images to imgur so that I'm not sitting on the shitter and trying to highlight a mountain of text in an attempt to copy one link only to find myself copying the entire fucking post like a fat thumbed idiot. Phone Post 3.0

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Pretjah, you know I love you but those links. Those links bro, I can't. Phone Post 3.0

thanks for trying

here ya go

http://imgur.com/qY5GbaD.jpg

http://imgur.com/JY0KVUr.jpg

http://imgur.com/1PFKQ4t.jpg

http://imgur.com/be0wkTi.jpg





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IDOHARM for future reference you may need to add ".jpg" at the end of a imgur link to make it work. Phone Post 3.0

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East bound and down Korean Powers - IDOHARM for future reference you may need to add ".jpg" at the end of a imgur link to make it work. Phone Post 3.0
If you hadn't have come along, we'd be neck deep in phone post 3.0. Phone Post 3.0

sorry i just added them while you were doing it...thank you vote ups for both of you when i get some back

Good shit by the way, Pretjah! Phone Post 3.0

hingeunhinged - Tattoo designs? Phone Post 3.0

yeah

i'm working on trying to get a portfolio together to earn an apprenticeship somewhere

I'm looking to get a tattoo in honor of my father who passed away 6 months ago. I should pay you to draw one up.

I've wanted something simple with a cross, an Italian flag, an American flag and the words "In Loving Memory of...." with his birthday and the day he passed. I'm sure I can simply tell that to the tattoo artist and they'd do a good job too. I've just held off because I feel like it's missing something. Phone Post 3.0

Pretjah -
hingeunhinged - Tattoo designs? Phone Post 3.0

yeah

i'm working on trying to get a portfolio together to earn an apprenticeship somewhere
Pics of tattoos work good for a apprenticeship Phone Post 3.0

Vulva Fabulous - I'm looking to get a tattoo in honor of my father who passed away 6 months ago. I should pay you to draw one up.

I've wanted something simple with a cross, an Italian flag, an American flag and the words "In Loving Memory of...." with his birthday and the day he passed. I'm sure I can simply tell that to the tattoo artist and they'd do a good job too. I've just held off because I feel like it's missing something. Phone Post 3.0

honestly the artist should do that one there and make it fit best to your body part

ttt for morning shifters to give me their critiques