New Book Idea

I woke up thinking about this and got the first few paragraphs.  It is very raw but what do you think?

The Last of Men

 

Political correctness has become the law. No, not just law, but the religion. The gender wars are over and men lost. Not that there was much of a fight. It was over before I knew it was being waged. We had to change our names to be gender neutral. My name, Gray, a passive aggressive protest to include my former name in my new name. I was once called Ray but names are not important. Self Identity is important, you are what you say you are and as long as you follow the rolls associated with your identity you can be who you say you are. I am the last of men. I am not important. In fact I am least important.

 

The United States of Native and Indigenous, Non-Oppressive Life Forms, or the USNINOLF for short, is populated with 95% women or non-male genders. As one of the 5%, I am only allowed to take positions that are non threatening, non authoritative, and non technical. This is because white men like me are responsible for all oppression and hate for the first 10 million years of humanity. I work as a quality of life care specialist for the elderly white men left alive. These are the only people I am permitted to interact with.

 

The authority responsible for validating Identity is the Burrow of Propriety. They are the biggest organization in government. You can imagine how big they must be due to the size of the duty. They hold local boards where they listen to individuals requests to be assigned or reassigned to a gender or race. They have a massive matrix where they input your evidence for your case. If your evidence matches on a predetermined amount of criteria that matches your assignment you are able to identify. Though you can be challenged and if challenged you may get reassigned due to the perceptions of someone else. Of course you can appeal but, from what I understand, that takes a very long time.

 

 

Sounds like a nightmare, the storyline (for every real man).  It would sell though.

 

On a side note, read "the way of men" by Jack Donavan,  this the world men should live in.  His second book, " becoming  a barbarian" was a follow up and expounds on the goals of men in society.

I will take a look!  I have some ideas for how this is going to go but i need to develope a couple more characters to make it entertaining enough to read. 

Those books are the Tao Te Ching of all real men.

LMAO.....but not funny.

How did out nation get here?

How did our nation get here?

The world is 180* flipped upside down right now, and seemingly it happened gradually...the old slippery slope concept. But it also happened overnight. I happened both overnight and gradually.

It happened overnight back when America was legit stud America. Then someone named McCarthy came along to root out and expel commie infiltrators, and suddenly HE became the bad guy.

The fact was he was correct (fucking duh). There was massive commie infiltration and especially in colleges. And a few generations later we wonder how so many kids come out of college as full blown marxists, antifa faggots, and fucked up confused gender flexible retards. It was the infiltration that McCarthy was trying to stop.

Aside from that, here are a bunch of ideas to bounce around.

There is hope...my nephew wrote a paper about the opession of women and how it has set back society for a half a century.  Turned it in and got an A.  But he also wrote a more honest and counter paper describing America's decline since the so called women's revolution!  He gave it to his teacher at the end of the year and said this what he wanted to submit but decided to go with the other one because he knew she would have given him a F based on content and not on merit.  She told him he was right.  He played the game but kept his identity and can smell a pile of shit when it is in his face.  I have faith in the future!

nothing a good t virus or unfortanate national tragedy would help to set back in order. it's horrible to think that outside of that, not correctable.

 

that said, i fear something horrible heads our way that even all the ammo in the world won't fix.

She told him he was right.


So admitted right to his face that she's a subhuman retarded piece of shit?

that said, i fear something horrible heads our way that even all the ammo in the world won't fix.


What do you fear is on the way?

Among alternate things to fear, there's that whole thing with the current anomalies in the earth's spinning molten metal core and its magnetic field/polar-shift they expect coming that would leave us without protection from solar radiation etc., not to mention affect the tilt and rotation of the earth...

Moke - How did our nation get here?

The world is 180* flipped upside down right now, and seemingly it happened gradually...the old slippery slope concept. But it also happened overnight. I happened both overnight and gradually.

It happened overnight back when America was legit stud America. Then someone named McCarthy came along to root out and expel commie infiltrators, and suddenly HE became the bad guy.

The fact was he was correct (fucking duh). There was massive commie infiltration and especially in colleges. And a few generations later we wonder how so many kids come out of college as full blown marxists, antifa faggots, and fucked up confused gender flexible retards. It was the infiltration that McCarthy was trying to stop.

John Birch Society too!?!?

She wasn't even his most interesting teacher that year.  He had a religious study class where the teacher said unicorns were once real but they did not make it on Noah's arc because unicorns were gay animals....

fnunderful - 

She wasn't even his most interesting teacher that year.  He had a religious study class where the teacher said unicorns were once real but they did not make it on Noah's arc because unicorns were gay animals....


This is college or kindergarten?

fnunderful -

She wasn't even his most interesting teacher that year.  He had a religious study class where the teacher said unicorns were once real but they did not make it on Noah's arc because unicorns were gay animals....

WTF? Everyone knows unicorns are bisexual!

equine sodomy ftw!!

Moke -
fnunderful - 

She wasn't even his most interesting teacher that year.  He had a religious study class where the teacher said unicorns were once real but they did not make it on Noah's arc because unicorns were gay animals....


This is college or kindergarten?

This was high school.

Is the name "gray" a shortened version of the nickname "gay Ray?"

It is A fictional character!  He cannot be gay...it does not fit the storyline.

Semi-autobiographical is what I'm told.  By sources.